Student writing
Feminist nightmares [from a female writer]:
It sounds to me like Susan Brownmiller was a woman with little love from the opposite sex therefore driving her to an intense dislike for males. I would love to live in an era like the 1950s where there was a traditional kind of value and responsibility for women.
Punctuation issues leading to gender confusion:
Even though I was a girl mostly through elementary school I had all guy friends.
It sounds to me like Susan Brownmiller was a woman with little love from the opposite sex therefore driving her to an intense dislike for males. I would love to live in an era like the 1950s where there was a traditional kind of value and responsibility for women.
Punctuation issues leading to gender confusion:
Even though I was a girl mostly through elementary school I had all guy friends.
oh for gawdsake
To quote something from "The Big Book of the '70s" "somebody should take away her credit cards."
But that girl will be happy - she'll no doubt find a man more than happy the make sure she follows '50s gender roles!